Wednesday 29 March 2017

Kaya and Dylan B's Amazing Writing

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  1. Dear Mr. Webb and writers,
    Your video is phenomenal. It really tells the entire story of the process. We are happy that you wrote an ending for Kaya and Dylan's story!

    Kaya likes how lots of people are interested in the story and are writing their own ending.

    Elie likes how you discuss the writing process for a week, and your work really paid off.

    Lola thinks that your stories are very funny. For example, we thought it was hilarious that Buck went through the car shed. In America, a car shed is called a garage.

    We were surprised to learn that you could share a google doc from New Zealand to America. You are about 6,700 miles away!

    Thanks for a great collaborative project!

    Happy writing!

    Mrs. Y♥llis
    California


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